when I am alone
you enter my thought,
you fill my thought.
though I can forget you,
I won't,I never.
remembering your name makes me excited,
recalling your smile makes me happy.
please don't be farther,
once appear in my view,
I want to see you once,talk to you once.
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Prasad.. Ive a small correction to tell u in this poem.
This line "Once Appear in my view" I don think it makes sense. Read it again carefully?
I guess it shud have been put this way. "Just appear once".. View has no place in htis sentence, its quite obvious!!!
Good One though!!!
haha. rite. thnx Vini. :)
hi prasad...hmmm..nice poems..
i appreciate ur work...
keep it up..
wat abt this line..i didnt get..
"
though I can forget you,
I won't,I never."
cheers
mahesh.
hii babu
thnx for ur commnt [:)]
comin to tht line
apparently I was afraid I would fall in love with her.
it wud b better to forget her at tht stage.
and I could do that.
so I was saying I could forget her.
but I said I would never do that for the reasons stated in nxt lines.
"remembering your name makes me excited,
recalling your smile makes me happy."
does it make sense or looks like just a blabbering of a boy in love ;)
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