Sunday, January 15, 2006

I tried the best I could

I tried the best I could
I went as far as I could
But the other end seems so far
And I understood I dint go far
Reaching there seemed strangely impossible
So I left my trial and reverted back
When I reached the place where I started
I could recognize its a failure
but I am satisfied
.

6 comments:

the sauran said...

nice one dude. ur poem has great significance.

The Phoenix said...

thnx

Anonymous said...

ur poem contains lot of meaning it resembles a failure in ur life well i m also in the same situation i m seeing my life in this poem :)

Thanks
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The Phoenix said...

yep.
I had many :)

n mny mny thnx for ur comment.
'i m seeing my life in this poem :)'
thts the greatest honor ths poem can have.
thnx dear. n gud luk :)

Anonymous said...

hmm its gud dat u realised at some point..

take a new path dis time..with a new goal which is more colourful..

The Phoenix said...

ya. I will.

In fact I keep on doing tht again nd agian. :)