When we had laughed together,
when I was angry at you after a silly fight,
when we sat side by side just staring into the space,
when we were wondering what we will be doing after few years,
I treasure those moments.
May be we haven't talked much lately,
but I just want to say a few words
"Happy Friendship Day, my dear friend!"
and I am grateful to the God, that I met you.
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Ohhhhh I just luuuuv this poem of urs prasad.. Don u dare call it a stupid one..
Very carefully chosen sentences. I felt like I as in that place. U created the ambience, really nice and soothing kind, very pleasant.
I rem KUCH KUCH HOTA HAIN, where they sit to watch the stars, for that one line of urs!!!
AWEEEEESOME....
thnxx viniii
im overwhelmed.
n ur commnt added more beauty to ths poem. [:)]
though i can sense the feelings hidden inside the lines of this "poem",i guess u need to b more exquisite with the choice of ur words,otherwise it'll remain mere a "gibberish piece of writing".
nice try....but try harder
@anonymous
YEP. I know. :(
but cant help. weak in vocab.
newayz thnx for da suggestion. will try harder nxt time :)
very nice poem Prasad :)
Didn't know you had such an awesome talent! Looking forward to reading more of your poetry :)
akhii
thnku thnku :)
nuvvantagaa encourage chestuntee inka aaagutaana.. kummestaaa :D
That was an awesome one. As some one rightly said.. poems are words unsaid,feelings unexpressed. This poem of urs.. tells how friednship is valued..hats off..to U Prasad
poems are words unsaid,feelings unexpressed
line suuper dooper.
nd thnx niru :)
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